Talk:USS Breese

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Reviewer: Miyagawa (talk · contribs) 19:08, 23 May 2013 (UTC) [reply ]

Ok, I'll be your reviewer for this one! Seems only fair as you've reviewed so many of my ST episode articles. :) Miyagawa (talk) 19:08, 23 May 2013 (UTC) [reply ]

Lead: Worth saying that it was the only ship named for the Captain, as you have in the body of the article.

• Fixed. —Ed! ^(talk) 21:04, 24 May 2013 (UTC) [reply ]

Interwar period: Probably just me being dense, but is there another way to word "cruised for several days as a convoy escort toward the end of World War I" so that it doesn't sound like the end of World War I was a destination?

• Fixed. —Ed! ^(talk) 21:04, 24 May 2013 (UTC) [reply ]

World War II: Worth saying that the Yorktown was an aircraft carrier and that the San Francisco was a heavy cruiser.

• Fixed. —Ed! ^(talk) 21:04, 24 May 2013 (UTC) [reply ]

Just one duplicate link. Image is suitably referenced, all references are sound. Miyagawa (talk) 20:08, 23 May 2013 (UTC) [reply ]

• Fixed. That's everything. Thanks for your review! —Ed! ^(talk) 21:04, 24 May 2013 (UTC) [reply ]

• Good work. All set for GA. Miyagawa (talk) 22:12, 24 May 2013 (UTC) [reply ]