Talk:Excitor
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Vessels
[edit ]It was unclear to me whether the article was about the vessel (at the time of last edit Excitor II) or about the tourist experience operated by the vessels over the years. To solve this I have added headings for each of the vessels, using existing article content, plus a new reference source for the Excitor III.
Essentially this means that the article is now primarily about the experience although it includes information about the vessels used to provide the experience. Hopefully I have made things clearer with this change.Matrixmania (talk) 00:57, 17 December 2010 (UTC) [reply ]
Accidents
[edit ]Since the referenced accident occurred onboard Excitor I, I have made this a sub-section under Excitor I rather than a section of its own. Have there been any other accidents on other vessels?Matrixmania (talk) 00:57, 17 December 2010 (UTC) [reply ]