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The building is now a Wikidata item (Q108151913). It has coordinates, so chances are one fine day on my way to elsewhere I'll notice it in WikiShootMe or Commons App and we'll have a photo. Or someone else will. Jim.henderson (talk) 13:34, 19 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Nuts240 This is way too much material about a company this company acquired, with nearly all of the information predating the acquisition. I'm going to hold off reverting for the moment because of the inuse tag (maybe you're trimming it back), but I can't see more than like a single paragraph about Barton's in this article. I'm barely familiar with Barton's, but if they operated 3,000 stores, it's extremely likely it's notable enough for a stand-alone article, which this article can refer to. — Rhododendritestalk \\ 17:51, 11 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]
(削除) The link to Washington Market does not lead to where you expect it to (the lead links Tribeca separately, which is what I would do). (削除ここまで)
Not sure I understand. It leads to where we cover Washington Market, mentioned there in boldtext. I suppose it would be consistent to change the link in the lead to also point to that section?
Yes, you need to be consistent. AM
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(削除) started the company in 1886 – the company’s name should be included here in full, as the main text of the article is separate from the lead section. (削除ここまで)
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(削除) moved up to The Bronx - ‘moved up to the Bronx’. (削除ここまで)
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(削除) they relocated – ‘the company relocated’ sounds clearer imo. (削除ここまで)
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(削除) Introduce Jimmy Carter. (削除ここまで)
Done reworded
(削除) Link food wholesalers (Wholesale marketing of food); ton (you need to be specific about which kind of ton is being referred to); Virginia; North Carolina; Georgia; blanched (Blanching (cooking)); Manhattan; condominium; candy; Allentown, Pennsylvania. (削除ここまで)
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(削除) oil or dry-roasted - ‘oil- or dry-roasted’. (削除ここまで)
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(削除) Who is Rocco Damato? (削除ここまで)
There's not much information about him that I could find apart from him being the guy who bought Bazzini and became its CEO. Added the CEO bit. — Rhododendritestalk \\ 22:30, 28 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
(削除) In 2011, it acquired – the text could be made clearer by specifying what it is referring to here. (削除ここまで)(削除) (削除ここまで)
As of 2017, it is the oldest nut company in the United States. - this seems strange right at the end of the section, I would put it at the very start.
? Doesn't a history section typically go chronologically? I tried moving it around, but it always seemed odd to mix the historical information with something about 2017 (i.e. putting the last part of its history at the beginning of the history section). IMO its presence in the lead means we shouldn't worry about putting at at the top of this section? — Rhododendritestalk \\ 22:30, 28 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I can see what you mean, I think the issue was probably that this last paragraph of the History section has information that isn't really historical, it's more a description of the current company. Suggestion (not GA, so please ignore me if you wish): consider preceding the History section with another one ('Organisation'?) that includes what the company sells, where it's currently based, the CEO, and its trademark. Amitchell125 (talk) 06:19, 29 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
(削除) in Renaissance – ‘in the Renaissance’ sounds better imo. (削除ここまで)
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(削除) A large number of businesses... - this long sentence makes little sense at present, splitting it into separate ones would help, I think. (削除ここまで)
The sentence in question is "A large number of businesses, mostly food wholesalers, operated out of the building in the first half of the 20th century." Could you say more about how that would be split? — Rhododendritestalk \\ 22:34, 28 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
(削除) Ref 1 (Anthony Depalma) shouldn't contain text in capitals (MOS:ALLCAPS). Other references where this occurs (e.g. Ref 8 (Claiborne)) should also be amended. (削除ここまで)
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(削除) It would imo help readers if Ref 1 (Anthony Depalma) included "url-access= subscription", as you need to log in to access it. Other references linking to unarchived NYT pages would also benefit from being amended in this way (e.g. Ref 3 (Buckley)). (削除ここまで)
(削除) There’s almost nothing in the article about fruit or chocolate products, or indeed any of the different products sold under the brand name of Bazzini. (削除ここまで)
The tough thing is searching for this kind of information. There are a lot of ads and false positives to sift through. I found a few sources which list them in the most basic, generalized way, so have added those. — Rhododendritestalk \\ 02:09, 29 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
(削除) The official website is not mentioned. (削除ここまで)
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(削除) There is nothing about any of the company's advertising campaigns. (削除ここまで)
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