Talk:SweeTarts
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SweeTarts [edit source ]
This is about the popular chalk-candy product. Kinda short. The length isn't an issue, I want to know how I did with the writing and humor. --Señor DiZtheGreat Honor me! CUN AOTM ( Worship me!) (Praise me!) (Join me!) AMEN! 22:56, 17 May 2007 (UTC)
Humour:
10
Couldn't have been executed better, my boy. Superb job on the humor.
Concept:
10
Also excellent. Seemed consistent and very original.
Prose and formatting:
9
Just because of the two red links. Get those outta there, and maybe add some more blue ones.
Images:
9
Only one image, but that's fine since any more would your text to picture ratio disproportional, and would create a black hole in Uncyclopedia. And we all know what happened last time that happened. I just wish the picture was bigger. Much bigger. I'd say about 2.5 times bigger would be better.
Miscellaneous:
10
Categorized, no spelling or grammatical errors, and a nice delivery.