Talk:Sissy
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I didn't know what this page was about so I put this here, feel free to remove. —Braydie 04:01, 4 March 2007 (UTC)
I think that this article on Sissy shows promise, but frankly all these "s"'s have fried my mind. Constructive comments sought - I really want this one to turn out well. Dame PPsigPPlips.gif GUN PotY WotM 2xPotM 17xVFH VFP Poo PMS •YAP• 01:18, 31 January 2007 (UTC)
PP, I just...You see, I....dammit. Alliteration is fun. And in the article Alliteration it is entirely appropriate, even though any sensible ideas in the prose are nearly illegible behind the straining after words beginning with "a".
But here I would find a way to abandon it after the first section or so. There are screamingly funny jokes to be told -- "Some call this cruising; so where's the ship?" -- and the drumbeat of s-words hinders the clarity of the prose.
You could simply say, at the beginning of the second section, "But enough of the S's" and continue without the alliteration. Or you could be ornate and claim that Uncyc editors have rebuked the authors severely and threatened them with virtual decapitalization unless they dropped the awful alliteration.
Or not. It is entirely your decision, and as usual you have produced a funny, way-above-average article. ----OEJ 19:20, 4 February 2007 (UTC)