Talk:One Out of Ten Doctors
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This isn't done yet, I'm just sorta stuck and need feedback/ideas for expansion. - - § . | WotM | PLS | T | C | A 00:42, 7 February 2007 (UTC)
Humour:
6
Clever, but the part about his early life should be cut back and rewritten based on one or two of the ideas in that section, so the reader gets a quick laugh and move on to the rest of it.
Concept:
9
I like this idea a lot. I admit that I had to think about it a bit, but when it finally hit me, I wasn't bruised as badly as you might expect from being hit with an abstract concept.
Prose and formatting:
9
Basically flawless in this department, but it's short. A snob would probably find something specific to pick on, but I'm not one of those. Lots of blue links, which is a delightful thing.
Images:
5
This will need to be worked on, although this concept doesn't lend itself to pictures.
Miscellaneous:
10
n/a
Final Score:
39
I would recommend putting in more quack-medicine references. Look around badscience.net for more ideas. Also, might I suggest The Hypochondriac's Pocket Guide to Horrible Diseases You Probably Already Have for more potential ideas?
Reviewer:
Thinking cap small.png » The Acceptable Cainad (Fnord) 02:07, 7 February 2007 (UTC)
Maybe someone should put in something to the effect of "9 out of 10 doctors agree that 1 out of 10 doctors is an idiot."
Done[edit source ]
Another redlink article fixed --Fuck Signatures, I Give Up! 20:01, August 29, 2012 (UTC)