Showing posts with label false parallel. Show all posts
Showing posts with label false parallel. Show all posts
Wednesday, January 5, 2011
Copy Edit du Jour
The road leads you through flourishing rainforests, flowing waterfalls,
plunging pools and dramatic seascapes.
Changed to:
The road leads you through flourishing rainforests AND PAST flowing
waterfalls, plunging pools and dramatic seascapes.
Any road that leads you through pools isn't much of a road. (I'm still thinking on "flourishing" and "plunging." I'm not too keen on those, either.)
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