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Excellent article, guys! You can probably gets this to FA status in the future.
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- It was directed by
(削除) Trey (削除ここまで) Parker... – His full name has already been mentioned.
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- was rated TV-MA-L in the United States – Add an explanation of what TV-MA-L means ("for strong to extreme language").
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- Plot
- Link characters such as Kenny and Mr. Mackey.
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- Link "duck-billed platypus"
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- The kids return from the cable studio with – Cable studio?
(削除) Tomorrow (削除ここまで) The next day at the South Park Forum
- Use Template:Convert to convert pounds into kilograms.
- Spell out contractions such as "it's", "didn't", and "that's" (I'm not sure if there's more).
- Production
- Image caption says "Weight Gain 4000" when it should say "Damien".
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- in part because it was the first new episode of
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(削除) Trey (削除ここまで) Parker said he and (削除) fellow show creator Matt (削除ここまで) Stone
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- so
(削除) Matt (削除ここまで) Stone instead provided the character's voice
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- By the time "Damien" was filmed – Is "filmed" really the right word? I don't think animated shows are filmed so a better word would be "animated".
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- three-dimension seldom used in the series before – Should it be "three-dimension seldom never used in the series before"?
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- naturally while
(削除) filming (削除ここまで) recording the episode
- Kenny, Jimbo, duck-billed platypus, and Pip should be linked in the plot section, not here.
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- along with
(削除) 11 (削除ここまで) eleven other episodes
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- along with the other
(削除) 12 (削除ここまで) twelve from the first season
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- Other
- Repeated use of "kid/s" isn't really formal - I'd go with "child/ren", but it's not too big a deal.
- Themes
(削除) Trey (削除ここまで) Parker said the writers sought
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- Seitz said the episode mocks
(削除) people who (削除ここまで) "morality cops who misbehave in private"
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(削除) Matt (削除ここまで) Stone said of this aspect
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- Cultural references
- provided by
(削除) Trey (削除ここまで) Parker (sorry for nagging) ;P
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- Pinhead character at the ending of the 1992 horror
(削除) movie (削除ここまで) film, Hellraiser III: Hell on Earth
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- Unlink Mr. Mackey and Priest Maxi
- even though it was
(削除) filmed (削除ここまで) produced afterward.
- which was still
(削除) extremely (削除ここまで) popular
- Reception
- What does "HH" mean?
- What episode got "5.4 viewers in 3.2 million households", "Damien" or "Mecha-Streisand"?
- "Mecha-Streisand". Unfortunately, the source doesn't have the viewers/households for "Damien" specifically, but I thought it was worth including the Mecha-Streisand numbers because it gave a bit of context to what the ratings mean for both episodes. I threw the part in question into parenthesis to try to clarify which episode it relates to. — Hunter Kahn (contribs) 05:03, 9 April 2009 (UTC) [reply ]
(削除) Trey (削除ここまで) Parker said following the tremendous
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- Rolling Stone contributor Doug Pratt called it a "high point" of the first season
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- Gary Budzak of The Columbus Dispatch described Damien – Damien the character or Damien the episode? :P
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- Lead
- which leads to the ultimate fight between Jesus and Satan – How does it lead to the "ultimate fight" between Jesus and Satan?
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(削除) Not done (削除ここまで) – That sentence still doesn't make any sense for someone who hasn't read the plot section. :P TheLeft orium 16:01, 8 April 2009 (UTC) [reply ]
I will finish the review later today or tomorrow. —TheLeft orium 16:27, 7 April 2009 (UTC) [reply ]