User contributions for CliffC

22 March 2013

• 21:5921:59, 22 March 2013 diff hist +132 User talk:Gwickwire →Bloomex sources for sites, founding date: dropped a notice on his talk page
• 21:3521:35, 22 March 2013 diff hist −30 Kars4Kids the lead is not the place to advertise your organization ("accepts tens of thousands of cars for donation annually free of charge"); we have already explained its purpose
• 21:2621:26, 22 March 2013 diff hist +3,054 User talk:Dimitri Lokhonia →Conflicts of interest: new section
• 20:3920:39, 22 March 2013 diff hist +317 Kars4Kids added a second source (not that it was necessary), restored double-sourced fact to lead
• 20:0520:05, 22 March 2013 diff hist +401 Talk:Kars4Kids →Jewish: indeed
• 19:1219:12, 22 March 2013 diff hist +303 User talk:Gwickwire →Bloomex sources for sites, founding date: more
• 18:2618:26, 22 March 2013 diff hist +429 User talk:Gwickwire →Bloomex sources for sites, founding date: r
• 18:1318:13, 22 March 2013 diff hist +480 User talk:Gwickwire →Bloomex sources for sites, founding date: new section
• 14:5114:51, 22 March 2013 diff hist +174 User talk:CliffC →Kars For Kids: ack
• 14:4614:46, 22 March 2013 diff hist +592 Talk:Kars4Kids →Lakewood, NJ: fact is encyclopedic
• 14:2914:29, 22 March 2013 diff hist +327 Talk:Kars4Kids →Leade, lede, or what have you: see WP:LEAD
• 14:2214:22, 22 March 2013 diff hist +226 Talk:Kars4Kids →Lakewood, NJ: 'obscurity' of headquarters location does not matter
• 14:1014:10, 22 March 2013 diff hist +319 Kars4Kids Undid revision 546293404 by 165.254.85.130 (talk) - no, please read WP:LEAD before editing again, the lead summarizes the body of the article
• 14:0614:06, 22 March 2013 diff hist +50 Kars4Kids location of a business, etc is significant, see WP:LEAD, and also note that General Motors is "...is an American multinationa
• 13:0413:04, 22 March 2013 diff hist +61 Kars4Kids →Jingle: add description of the "well known" jingle for those who may not be familiar with it
• 03:5203:52, 22 March 2013 diff hist +145 Kars4Kids define "The report" being criticized, as described in the Yeshiva World News citation. The criticism was in an open letter, not "by some local residents"
• 01:3001:30, 22 March 2013 diff hist −2 Kars4Kids →Disclosure concerns: use the year instead of a vague phrase; article cited says 'also'

21 March 2013

• 22:2922:29, 21 March 2013 diff hist +28 Orphan Train →See also: descr
• 22:2822:28, 21 March 2013 diff hist −64 Orphan Train →Media references: clean up
• 22:0722:07, 21 March 2013 diff hist +898 N User talk:204.234.78.212 General note: Removal of content, blanking on Orphan Train. using TW
• 21:3921:39, 21 March 2013 diff hist +3,812 Orphan Train undo series of deletions since 29 January by vandal 204.234.78.212
• 21:1721:17, 21 March 2013 diff hist −181 Don McLeroy this material doesn't belong in lead even with a source, which it lacks (also note that 'refutiate' is not a real word)
• 19:2219:22, 21 March 2013 diff hist +181 Kars4Kids restore earlier lead paragraph - see WP:LEAD for what's pertinent here, "The lead serves as an introduction to the article and a summary of its most important aspects."
• 19:1619:16, 21 March 2013 diff hist +4 m Kars4Kids add forgotten brackets
• 19:1419:14, 21 March 2013 diff hist +104 Kars4Kids →Hurricane Sandy Assistance: edit section for encyclopedic style and flow, stick to the citations, add citation titles
• 18:2918:29, 21 March 2013 diff hist −1,701 Playwright rm another chunk of bookspam
• 18:2118:21, 21 March 2013 diff hist −107 Playwright →References: rm WP:BOOKSPAM
• 18:1618:16, 21 March 2013 diff hist −785 Mac Wellman Undid revision 498938946 by Pcastagn (talk) - WP:BOOKSPAM
• 17:5817:58, 21 March 2013 diff hist −603 In the Next Room (or The Vibrator Play) Undid revision 546001456 by Pcastagn (talk) - nothing about inspiration for the play, looks more like WP:BOOKSPAM
• 17:4417:44, 21 March 2013 diff hist −1 Carotid artery stenosis →Surgery and Stenting: ce

19 March 2013

• 23:2723:27, 19 March 2013 diff hist +37 m Morris Canal Reverted edits by 173.70.187.103 (talk) to last version by Addbot
• 23:1423:14, 19 March 2013 diff hist +588 User talk:Kilababsie welcome ! current
• 23:0723:07, 19 March 2013 diff hist +37 ISTJ restore phrase removed without explanation, ask for a citation - if none shows up after a while, the phrase can be removed
• 21:2721:27, 19 March 2013 diff hist 0 User talk:CliffC →The period at the end of the poem 'The Red Wheelbarrow' by William Carlos Williams: correction, I had the has/hasn't books reversed
• 21:2121:21, 19 March 2013 diff hist +1,038 User talk:CliffC →The period at the end of the poem 'The Red Wheelbarrow' by William Carlos Williams: reply
• 17:4217:42, 19 March 2013 diff hist +508 N User talk:Kilababsie General note: Editing tests. using TW
• 17:4117:41, 19 March 2013 diff hist +1 m The Red Wheelbarrow Reverted edits by Kilababsie (talk) to last version by Christian75
• 11:2011:20, 19 March 2013 diff hist +1 m The Red Wheelbarrow Reverted edits by Kilababsie (talk) to last version by Maxim

18 March 2013

• 22:2022:20, 18 March 2013 diff hist −7 Talk:Bloomex reinstate edits by Wwood that repaired incorrectly indented typing
• 16:5816:58, 18 March 2013 diff hist −257 Talk:Bloomex Undid revision 545233808 by Wwoods (talk) - all material on this page remains pertinent and should be kept for reference - debate is renewed on subjects even years later

17 March 2013

• 19:3919:39, 17 March 2013 diff hist −19 Tony Martin (farmer) provide requested citation
• 18:5818:58, 17 March 2013 diff hist +16 Tony Martin (farmer) →Burglary and shooting: + definition
• 18:4718:47, 17 March 2013 diff hist +5 1984 New York City Subway shooting →Cultural references: bulletize list
• 18:3618:36, 17 March 2013 diff hist +472 United States Penitentiary, Hazelton Undid revision 544889283 by 184.19.91.157 (talk) - unexplained deletion
• 18:3518:35, 17 March 2013 diff hist +922 N User talk:184.19.91.157 General note: Removal of content, blanking on United States Penitentiary, Hazelton. using TW
• 18:3418:34, 17 March 2013 diff hist +922 N User talk:50.121.176.120 General note: Removal of content, blanking on United States Penitentiary, Hazelton. using TW
• 00:5900:59, 17 March 2013 diff hist +19 In the Next Room (or The Vibrator Play) →Productions: +
• 00:5700:57, 17 March 2013 diff hist −85 In the Next Room (or The Vibrator Play) →Productions: edits for consistent style and format
• 00:3700:37, 17 March 2013 diff hist +107 In the Next Room (or The Vibrator Play) standardize cite format

16 March 2013

• 14:1714:17, 16 March 2013 diff hist +473 United States Penitentiary, Hazelton restoring item removed without explanation