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UnBooks:Encyclopedia of Machete Battles [edit source ]
Advice, si vous plais. -- Le Cejak • <-> 19:35, 29 September 2007 (UTC)
Humour:
7
some good chuckles, but nothing sparkling.
Concept:
7
good concept, although the title is a little misleading. it sounds like it might include accounts of actual machete battles.
Prose and formatting:
9.9
no faults here. maybe move an image to the left to make your article sexier.
Images:
7.5
love the monkey one, the other ones are acceptable. throw a caption on the gnome one.
Miscellaneous:
10
love the abandoned places part
Final Score:
41.4
a solid article worthy of both praise and betterment. i'd like to see some accounts of famous machete battles. maybe try for a slightly more encyclopeic tone, while keeping the veiled references to being terrorized in 'nam and the general macho tone also.