Talk:Subliminal Messages
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From Pee Review[edit source ]
I wrote the page...picture by someone else. Let me know what you think.
Humour:
8
I was amused. Good job.
Concept:
10
Great topic for mockage, and pulled off well.
Prose and formatting:
5
This is a weak point. It needs some links, definitely, and you need to think of ways to make some of the sentences make sense as written. I also recommend using the <small> wiki formatting for the subliminal messages, as they're a little too easy to see at the moment. They're like... superliminal right now...
Images:
7
Effective use of the joke. Could use more images to drive the point home. If necessary, utilize Image Request.
Miscellaneous:
8
It made me laugh, and that always gets you a good review.
Final Score:
38
I liked this article. I think just a little cleanup, and you're ready for VFH.
Reviewer:
--<< Bradmonogram.png >> 02:40, 31 January 2007 (UTC)
I've made some of the messages more subliminal, but I bet someone can do an even better job. --General In sin er ate hymn 04:53, 3 February 2007 (UTC)
Humour:
6
Not quite LOL, but amusing.
Concept:
9
Good topic.
Prose and formatting:
6
Too hard to read at the moment - not sure what to do about this. Good getting the variation per section.
Images:
7
Nice, could do with one or two more good ones.
Miscellaneous:
7
Final Score:
35
Good idea, needs another concept or two and up to twice the length.
Reviewer:
David Gerard 11:41, 6 February 2007 (UTC)