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I have the following C++ program:
#include <iostream>
#include <cstdlib>
#include <ctime>
#include <vector>
void printVector (std::vector<int>& vec)
{
for (int a = 0; a < vec.size(); a++)
std::cout << (char)vec[a] << ", ";
}
int main ()
{
const std::string HANGMAN[] = {"\n------+",
"\n |\n |\n |\n |\n |\n------+",
"\n ---+\n |\n |\n |\n |\n |\n------+",
"\n ---+\n | |\n |\n |\n |\n |\n------+",
"\n ---+\n | |\n O |\n |\n |\n |\n------+",
"\n ---+\n | |\n O |\n | |\n |\n |\n------+",
"\n ---+\n | |\n O |\n /| |\n |\n |\n------+",
"\n ----\n | |\n O |\n /|\\ |\n |\n |\n-------",
"\n ----\n | |\n O |\n /|\\ |\n / |\n |\n-------",
"\n ----\n | |\n O |\n /|\\ |\n / \\ |\n |\n-------"};
const std::string WORDS[] = {"zigzagging", "wigwagging", "grogginess", "beekeeping", "mummifying",
"fluffiness", "fulfilling", "shabinness", "revivified", "kobnobbing",
"beekeepers", "wheeziness", "shagginess", "sleeveless", "parallaxes",
"woolliness", "chumminess", "skyjacking", "grubbiness", "wobbliness",
"feebleness", "jaywalking", "alkalizing", "blabbering", "overjoying"};
srand(time(0));
std::string compWord = WORDS[rand() % 25];
char compHiddenWord[] = "----------";
int hangmanPos = 0;
std::vector<int> guessed;
char userGuess;
bool letterCorrect;
while (hangmanPos != 9)
{
std::cout << "\nThis is your hangman:\n" << HANGMAN[hangmanPos] <<
"\n\nThese are the letters you've already guessed:\n\n";
printVector(guessed);
std::cout << "\n\nThis is my word:\n\n" << compHiddenWord <<
"\n\nGuess a letter: ";
std::cin >> userGuess;
guessed.push_back(userGuess);
letterCorrect = false;
for (int a = 0; a < compWord.size(); a++)
if (compWord[a] == userGuess)
{
if (letterCorrect == false)
{
std::cout << userGuess << " is in my word!\n\n\n";
letterCorrect = true;
}
compHiddenWord[a] = userGuess;
}
if (letterCorrect == false)
{
std::cout << "Oops! " << userGuess << " is not in my word.";
hangmanPos++;
}
else
for (int a = 0; a < compWord.size(); a++)
if (compWord == compHiddenWord)
{
std::cout << "Well done, " << compWord << " was my word!";
return 0;
}
}
std::cout << "\nOh Dear! Looks like you've been hanged. My word was actually " << compWord << ".";
}
Which is supposed to replicate the classic game of hangman visually. Is the code fully optimized? Is there an other way I could improve it?
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asked Apr 27, 2013 at 12:12
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I'm by far no expert, and I might be wrong on some of my statements, so take them as a basis for discussion. Anyway, I am trying to learn about code quality in C++ myself, so I'm giving it a shot.
printVector
should take the argument as const-ref, because the vector is not supposed to be changed in the function call.- Consider using an iterator to loop through the vector in
printVector
. However, in a small-scale program like this I don't see this as a big issue. In larger programs, it might help you to make a function more general. And thanks to C++11'sauto
, it will be very readable -- even more so if you use a range-basedfor
loop. - You're using the
vector<int>
guessed
to store thechar
s fromuserGuess
. Why not avector<char>
to storechar
? Would also make the type cast to(char)
inprintVector
unnecessary. - Also you're mixing C-arrays and STL's
std::vector
, C-strings (char *
) andstd::string
. Try to stick to the STL versions throughout. If you are using a C++11 capable compiler, you can even initialize the std::vector the same way as you're doing with the C-array now. - You are using curly braces
{}
infor
loops andif/else
statements only when absolutely required. Most style guides encourage using braces for everyfor/if/else
block, or at most allow omitting them for one-line "blocks". The reason is readability (you can always expect to find a}
where a longer block ends) and editability (It's easy to forget adding the braces when adding a line to the supposedfor/if/else
block). - It doesn't look like idiomatic C++ to compare a bool variable with
==
as inif(letterCorrect == false)
. You should use something likeif (! letterCorrect)
instead. - You should add a
return 0;
statement when the user is hanged. As far as I know it isn't required for themain
function, but as you're already returning withreturn 0;
when the user guesses the word, you should also do so at the end of the function. - The condition
if (compWord == compHiddenWord)
is wrong. You're looping over the array elements, but then you're comparing the pointer to the0th
element of the array to the std::string, instead of comparing the array elements. If you follow my suggestion above and change compHiddenWord to std::string, then you can omit the loop and simply writeif(compWord == compHiddenWord)
(Edit: As I learned, it also works correctly for comparisons of char* and std::string, so I deleted my example for by-character comparison) - You're using
a
as a loop index. While this isn't wrong, C++ programmers would typically usei
orj
for this purpose. - Edit: Your hangman array goes from 0 to 9 -- but in the
while
loop you never reach the 9 thanks to thehangManPos != 9
condition. Therefore, you will never print the completely hanged hangman.
Let me know what you think!
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