For my display functions in my Blackjack game, I want to control each player's stats output based on whether a turn is in progress or has ended. Normally, you could only see one card that your opponent(s) hold, while the rest are only revealed at the end of each turn. My code does that well, but I'm having trouble making it more concise.
The display function in Game
is called to display each player's stats (name, chips, and hand). It takes a Boolean argument to determine if it should display each CPU's partial stats (during each turn) or full stats (after each turn). At the function call in Game
, the bool
argument is passed to the respective display function in Player, where the human player and CPU player have individual display procedures. The display functions in Player
primarily display the chip amounts and card rank totals. They also call respective Hand
display functions which, again, solely depend on the Boolean argument for displaying the CPUs' stats.
How could I simplify this code to achieve the same output (shown below the code)?
Game.cpp
displayStats(false); // function call elsewhere in Game
void Game::displayStats(bool showCPUResults) const
{
players[0].displayPlayerStats(); // displays player stats
for (int i = 1; i < numPlrs; i++)
players[i].displayCPUStats(showCPUResults); // displays CPU stats
}
Player.cpp
void Player::displayPlayerStats() const
{
// always shown
std::stringstream ss;
std::cout << "\n* " << name << ": ";
std::cout << "($" << chips << ") ";
// displays two-digit card rank total (always shown)
if (totalCardsValue <= 9)
ss << "(0" << totalCardsValue << ") ";
else
ss << "(" << totalCardsValue << ") ";
std::cout << ss.str();
// displays human player's hand
playerHand[0].displayPlayerHand();
}
void Player::displayCPUStats(bool showResults) const
{
// always shown
std::stringstream ss;
std::cout << "\n* " << name << ": ";
std::cout << "($" << chips << ") ";
if (!showResults)
{
std::cout << " ";
playerHand[0].displayCPUHand(showResults);
}
else
{
// only shown after each turn
if (totalCardsValue <= 9)
ss << "(0" << totalCardsValue << ") ";
else
ss << "(" << totalCardsValue << ") ";
std::cout << ss.str();
// displays CPU's hand
playerHand[0].displayCPUHand(showResults);
}
}
Hand.cpp
void Hand::displayPlayerHand() const
{
// displays player's full hand (always)
for (unsigned i = 0; i < cards.size(); i++)
std::cout << cards[i] << " ";
}
void Hand::displayCPUHand(bool showCPUHand) const
{
// displays CPU's first card (always)
std::cout << cards[0] << " ";
// displays the rest of the CPU's cards (only after each turn)
if (showCPUHand)
{
for (unsigned i = 1; i < cards.size(); i++)
std::cout << cards[i] << " ";
}
}
Output during a turn...
Jamal: (1000ドル) (23) [8C] [6H] [9C]
CPU1: (1000ドル) [AD]
...and after a turn...
Jamal: (1000ドル) (23) [8C] [6H] [9C]
CPU1: (1000ドル) (21) [AD] [KH]
1 Answer 1
If you want to make things more consice, you could change a few things:
Number of card printed on 2 digits:
if (totalCardsValue <= 9) ss << "(0" << totalCardsValue << ") "; else ss << "(" << totalCardsValue << ") ";
could be written
ss << ((totalCardsValue <= 9) ? "(0" : "(") << totalCardsValue << ") ";
or
ss << "(" << std::setw(2) << std::setfill('0') << totalCardsValue << ") ";
No need for temporary
std::stringstream
. I think you could juststd::cout
directly without usingstd::stringstream ss
.Removing duplicated code:
void Hand::displayPlayerHand()
does the same asvoid Hand::displayCPUHand(true)
. This would probably better if you were naming this methoddisplay
and calling the parameterdisplayAllCards
ordisplayOnlyFirst
. Also, you might want to give it a default value.Corresponding code for Hand.cpp is:
void Hand::display(bool displayAllCards) const { // displays the first card std::cout << cards[0] << " "; // displays the rest of the cards if required if (displayAllCards) { for (unsigned i = 1; i < cards.size(); i++) std::cout << cards[i] << " "; } }
Removing duplicated code: things can be changed in Player.cpp too as
Player::displayCPUStats
andPlayer::displayPlayerStats
really look alike.Edited to finish my answer: Indeed,
displayPlayerStats()
is nothing butdisplayCPUStats(true)
. Here again, it might be worth changing the names of methods and variables.Corresponding code for Player.cpp is:
void Player::displayStats(bool displayAllCards) const { std::cout << "\n* " << name << ": "; std::cout << "($" << chips << ") "; if (displayAllCards) { std::cout << ((totalCardsValue <= 9) ? "(0" : "(") << totalCardsValue << ") "; } playerHand[0].displayHand(displayAllCards); }
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\$\begingroup\$ Yes, I too am looking at
Player::displayPlayerStats
andPlayer::displayCPUStats
and trying to "merge" them. As forHand::displayCompHand
, it's actuallyHand::displayCPUHand
. I changed that part of the name but must've missed that instance. Sorry about that! Knowing that, you may continue what you were about to do (and I'll change that bit in the code now). \$\endgroup\$Jamal– Jamal2013年04月08日 21:22:14 +00:00Commented Apr 8, 2013 at 21:22 -
\$\begingroup\$ I've just finished. \$\endgroup\$SylvainD– SylvainD2013年04月08日 22:32:17 +00:00Commented Apr 8, 2013 at 22:32
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\$\begingroup\$ And I was just about to answer my question (alongside yours) since I've already found an answer. :-) Who should post it, then? \$\endgroup\$Jamal– Jamal2013年04月08日 22:34:57 +00:00Commented Apr 8, 2013 at 22:34
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\$\begingroup\$ Okay, I take back my answer; yours is more concise than mine. I really need to start practicing this. Thanks again! \$\endgroup\$Jamal– Jamal2013年04月08日 22:46:52 +00:00Commented Apr 8, 2013 at 22:46