I have made a replica of the game 2048. It works exactly how the game should work. However I was just looking to know where I could've possibly cleaned up my code or make it more efficient.
import random
board =([0,0,0,0],
[0,0,0,0],
[0,0,0,0],
[0,0,0,0])
def pieces_test(board):
places = find_non_zeros(board)
print(places)
def combine_numbers(board, value, new_y, new_x, del_y, del_x):
value *= 2
board[new_y][new_x] = value
board[del_y][del_x] = 0
return board
def find_zeros(board):
good_places = []
for i in range(len(board)):
for j in range(len(board[i])):
if board[i][j] == 0:
good_places.append([i,j])
return good_places
def find_non_zeros(board):
good_places = []
for i in range(len(board)):
for j in range(len(board[i])):
if board[i][j] != 0:
good_places.append([i,j])
return good_places
def start_of_game(board):
for i in range(2):
places = find_zeros(board)
new_coord = random.choice(places)
board[new_coord[0]][new_coord[1]] = 2
return board
def move_left(board):
not_left = True
unusable_pieces = []
while not_left:
not_left = False
pieces_positions = find_non_zeros(board)
#pieces_positions = [[piece1_y, piece1_x],[piece2_y, piece2_x]...]
for i in range(len(pieces_positions)):
if pieces_positions[i][1] != 0:
if board[pieces_positions[i][0]][pieces_positions[i][1]-1] == 0:
if [pieces_positions[i][0],pieces_positions[i][1]] in unusable_pieces:
index_value = unusable_pieces.index([pieces_positions[i][0],pieces_positions[i][1]])
unusable_pieces[index_value][1] -= 1
value = board[pieces_positions[i][0]][pieces_positions[i][1]]
board[pieces_positions[i][0]][pieces_positions[i][1]-1] = value
board[pieces_positions[i][0]][pieces_positions[i][1]] = 0
not_left = True
elif board[pieces_positions[i][0]][pieces_positions[i][1]-1] == board[pieces_positions[i][0]][pieces_positions[i][1]]:
if [pieces_positions[i][0],pieces_positions[i][1]] not in unusable_pieces:
if [pieces_positions[i][0], pieces_positions[i][1]-1] not in unusable_pieces:
value = board[pieces_positions[i][0]][pieces_positions[i][1]]
combine_numbers(board, value, pieces_positions[i][0], pieces_positions[i][1]-1, pieces_positions[i][0], pieces_positions[i][1])
unusable_pieces.append([pieces_positions[i][0], pieces_positions[i][1]-1])
not_left = True
# combine_numbers(board, value_of_board_pieces, new_y, new_x, del_y, del_x)
return board
def move_right(board):
not_right = True
unusable_pieces = []
while not_right:
not_right = False
pieces_positions = find_non_zeros(board)
pieces_positions = pieces_positions[::-1]
#pieces_positions = [[piece1_y, piece1_x],[piece2_y, piece2_x]...]
for i in range(len(pieces_positions)):
if pieces_positions[i][1] != 3:
if board[pieces_positions[i][0]][pieces_positions[i][1]+1] == 0:
if [pieces_positions[i][0],pieces_positions[i][1]] in unusable_pieces:
index_value = unusable_pieces.index([pieces_positions[i][0],pieces_positions[i][1]])
unusable_pieces[index_value][1] += 1
value = board[pieces_positions[i][0]][pieces_positions[i][1]]
board[pieces_positions[i][0]][pieces_positions[i][1]+1] = value
board[pieces_positions[i][0]][pieces_positions[i][1]] = 0
not_right = True
elif board[pieces_positions[i][0]][pieces_positions[i][1]+1] == board[pieces_positions[i][0]][pieces_positions[i][1]]:
if [pieces_positions[i][0],pieces_positions[i][1]] not in unusable_pieces:
if [pieces_positions[i][0], pieces_positions[i][1]+1] not in unusable_pieces:
value = board[pieces_positions[i][0]][pieces_positions[i][1]]
combine_numbers(board, value, pieces_positions[i][0], pieces_positions[i][1]+1, pieces_positions[i][0], pieces_positions[i][1])
unusable_pieces.append([pieces_positions[i][0], pieces_positions[i][1]+1])
not_right = True
return board
def move_up(board):
not_up = True
unusable_pieces = []
while not_up:
not_up = False
pieces_positions = find_non_zeros(board)
#pieces_positions = [[piece1_y, piece1_x],[piece2_y, piece2_x]...]
for i in range(len(pieces_positions)):
if pieces_positions[i][0] != 0:
if board[pieces_positions[i][0]-1][pieces_positions[i][1]] == 0:
if [pieces_positions[i][0],pieces_positions[i][1]] in unusable_pieces:
index_value = unusable_pieces.index([pieces_positions[i][0],pieces_positions[i][1]])
unusable_pieces[index_value][0] -= 1
value = board[pieces_positions[i][0]][pieces_positions[i][1]]
board[pieces_positions[i][0]-1][pieces_positions[i][1]] = value
board[pieces_positions[i][0]][pieces_positions[i][1]] = 0
not_up = True
elif board[pieces_positions[i][0]-1][pieces_positions[i][1]] == board[pieces_positions[i][0]][pieces_positions[i][1]]:
if [pieces_positions[i][0],pieces_positions[i][1]] not in unusable_pieces:
if [pieces_positions[i][0]-1, pieces_positions[i][1]] not in unusable_pieces:
value = board[pieces_positions[i][0]][pieces_positions[i][1]]
combine_numbers(board, value, pieces_positions[i][0]-1, pieces_positions[i][1], pieces_positions[i][0], pieces_positions[i][1])
unusable_pieces.append([pieces_positions[i][0]-1, pieces_positions[i][1]])
not_up = True
return board
def move_down(board):
not_down = True
unusable_pieces = []
while not_down:
not_down = False
pieces_positions = find_non_zeros(board)
pieces_positions = pieces_positions[::-1]
#pieces_positions = [[piece1_y, piece1_x],[piece2_y, piece2_x]...]
for i in range(len(pieces_positions)):
if pieces_positions[i][0] != 3:
if board[pieces_positions[i][0]+1][pieces_positions[i][1]] == 0:
if [pieces_positions[i][0],pieces_positions[i][1]] in unusable_pieces:
index_value = unusable_pieces.index([pieces_positions[i][0],pieces_positions[i][1]])
unusable_pieces[index_value][0] += 1
value = board[pieces_positions[i][0]][pieces_positions[i][1]]
board[pieces_positions[i][0]+1][pieces_positions[i][1]] = value
board[pieces_positions[i][0]][pieces_positions[i][1]] = 0
not_down = True
elif board[pieces_positions[i][0]+1][pieces_positions[i][1]] == board[pieces_positions[i][0]][pieces_positions[i][1]]:
if [pieces_positions[i][0],pieces_positions[i][1]] not in unusable_pieces:
if [pieces_positions[i][0]+1, pieces_positions[i][1]] not in unusable_pieces:
value = board[pieces_positions[i][0]][pieces_positions[i][1]]
combine_numbers(board, value, pieces_positions[i][0]+1, pieces_positions[i][1], pieces_positions[i][0], pieces_positions[i][1])
unusable_pieces.append([pieces_positions[i][0]+1, pieces_positions[i][1]])
not_down = True
return board
def add_piece(board):
free_spots = find_zeros(board)
chosen_spot = random.choice(free_spots)
board[chosen_spot[0]][chosen_spot[1]] = 2
return board
def main(board):
board = start_of_game(board)
game_finished= False
while game_finished == False:
if find_zeros(board) == []:
game_finished = True
continue
print(board[0],"\n",board[1],"\n",board[2],"\n",board[3])
move = input("do you want to move up, down, left or right")
if move == "up":
move_up(board)
if move == "down":
move_down(board)
if move == "left":
move_left(board)
if move == "right":
move_right(board)
board = add_piece(board)
main(board)
2 Answers 2
The thing that jumps out when reading this is the use of indexers: a snippet like this:
if board[pieces_positions[i][0]][pieces_positions[i][1]-1] == 0:
if [pieces_positions[i][0],pieces_positions[i][1]] in unusable_pieces:
index_value = unusable_pieces.index([pieces_positions[i][0],pieces_positions[i][1]])
unusable_pieces[index_value][1] -= 1
is extremely hard to read (and hence to debug) because of the onslaught of brackets (as an informal rule of thumb, if the code scrolls off to the right in a StackOverflow code window, that's a sign you should see how to tighten it up).
You could eliminate a lot of that by using python's built-in unpacking syntax. Since pieces_positions
is a list-of-lists, you can tame it by looping over it like this:
for y, x in pieces_positions:
#.....
Now hard to read stuff like
board[pieces_positions[i][0]][pieces_positions[i][1]-1]
becomes
board[y][x-1]
with that change your four main functions look more readable:
def move_right(board):
not_right = True
unusable_pieces = []
while not_right:
not_right = False
pieces_positions = find_non_zeros(board)
pieces_positions = pieces_positions[::-1]
#pieces_positions = [[piece1_y, piece1_x],[piece2_y, piece2_x]...]
for y, x in pieces_positions:
if x != 3:
if board[y][x+1] == 0:
if [y,x] in unusable_pieces:
index_value = unusable_pieces.index([y,x])
unusable_pieces[index_value][1] += 1
value = board[y][x]
board[y][x+1] = value
board[y][x] = 0
not_right = True
elif board[y][x+1] == board[y][x]:
if [y,x] not in unusable_pieces:
if [y, x+1] not in unusable_pieces:
value = board[y][x]
combine_numbers(board, value, y, x+1, y, x)
unusable_pieces.append([y, x+1])
not_right = True
return board
However, the four main functions are all basically symmetrical -- they only differ in the direction of movement and the limit condition. It'd be cleaner and easier to debug if you could get them down to a single function that was used everywhere.
In this case, you can express the movement more clearly by treating it as a pair of offsets added to your x and y values -- say, a single move(board, offset_x, offset_y)
function instead of the four you currently have. Then you can generalize the boundaries in something like this fashion:
for y, x in pieces_positions:
next_y = y + offset_y
next_x = x + offset_x
# python has a nice chained comparison that
# is great for checking a range
valid_x = -1 < next_x < 4
valid_y = -1 < next_y < 4
if not (valid_x and valid_y):
continue
This has the added advantage of making the actual changes to the board clearer too:
if board[next_y][next_x] == 0:
if [y,x] in unusable_pieces:
index_value = unusable_pieces.index([y,x])
if offset_y = 0: # this means an x-move
unusable_pieces[index_value][1] += offset_x
else: # a y move
unusable_pieces[index_value][0] += offset_y
value = board[y][x]
board[next_y][next_x] = value
board[y][x] = 0
Working through the unpacked values instead of range()
and a single general function instead of four functions that vary only on a couple of number placements will make the game a lot easier to read and thus to debug and maintain.
as a late review, i congratulate you for your separation of tasks, apart from the point made by @theodox, just if something is not going to be immutable, you can wrap it in a list
from
([0,0,0,0],
[0,0,0,0],
[0,0,0,0],
[0,0,0,0])
to
[[0,0,0,0],
[0,0,0,0],
[0,0,0,0],
[0,0,0,0]]
as it sends off the wrong message to code readers