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I am new to Haskell, and wrote a script to verify credit number. I did some tests, the script worked, but can it be improved further?

isCreditCardNumber :: String -> Bool
isCreditCardNumber number =
 0 == creditCardReminder ( creditCardDouble ( blowupCreditCardNumber ( reverse number)))
blowupCreditCardNumber :: String -> [(Int,Char)]
blowupCreditCardNumber creditCardNumber = zip [1..] creditCardNumber
creditCardDouble :: [(Int,Char)] -> [Int]
creditCardDouble [] = []
creditCardDouble ((index,digit):rest)
 | even index = (numberDoubleToList ((*2) $ digitToInt digit)) ++ creditCardDouble rest
 | otherwise = digitToInt digit : creditCardDouble rest
numberDoubleToList:: Int -> [Int]
numberDoubleToList number
 | number > 9 = map digitToInt (show number)
 | otherwise = [number]
creditCardReminder :: [Int] -> Int
creditCardReminder xs = sum xs `mod` 10
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asked Oct 22, 2016 at 0:12
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You can eta-reduce blowupCreditCardNumber:

blowupCreditCardNumber = zip [1..]

Using composition, you can also make isCreditCardNumber pointfree:

isCreditCardNumber = (==0) . creditCardReminder . creditCardDouble . blowupCreditCardNumber . reverse

You don't need to optimize numberDoubleToList by special-casing the one-digit case.

numberDoubleToList = map digitToInt . show

The explicit recursion in creditCardDouble can be averted by using library functions that specialize in particular recursive patterns:

creditCardDouble = concatMap foo where
 foo (index, digit) | even index = numberDoubleToList $ (*2) $ digitToInt digit
 | otherwise = [digitToInt digit]

foo's name makes foo look like a crutch, and that is good, because it is one.

I would inline definitions that are only used once and do not deserve to be in a library:

isCreditCardNumber = (==0) . (`mod` 10) . sum . concatMap foo . zip [1..] . reverse where
 foo (index, digit) | even index = map digitToInt $ show $ (*2) $ digitToInt digit
 | otherwise = [digitToInt digit]

digitToInt digit is used in both cases of foo, and so can be factored out:

isCreditCardNumber = (==0) . (`mod` 10) . sum . concatMap foo . zip [1..] . reverse where
 foo (index, digit) = bar index $ digitToInt digit
 bar index | even index = map digitToInt . show . (*2)
 | otherwise = pure

In fact, we don't need to generate the index and pass it to foo if all we do with it is put it into bar later:

isCreditCardNumber = (==0) . (`mod` 10) . sum . concatMap foo . zip (cycle [pure, map digitToInt . show . (*2)]) . reverse where
 foo (doubler, digit) = doubler $ digitToInt digit

foo is almost trivial, lets get rid of it entirely:

isCreditCardNumber = (==0) . (`mod` 10) . sum . concat . zipWith ($) (cycle [pure, map digitToInt . show . (*2)]) . map digitToInt . reverse

map digitToInt . show is pure on single digits, so we can factor it out of that list and then even factor out the (*):

isCreditCardNumber = (==0) . (`mod` 10) . sum . concatMap (map digitToInt . show) . zipWith (*) (cycle [1, 2]) . map digitToInt . reverse

Note that if you know the parity of the length of the credit card number, you can get rid of the reverse.

answered Oct 22, 2016 at 1:15
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  • \$\begingroup\$ wow, mate, this is so amazing!!! looks like I have a long way to learn Haskell. \$\endgroup\$ Commented Oct 22, 2016 at 1:50
  • \$\begingroup\$ hi mate, looks like "concatMap (digitToInt . show)" has change to concatMap ((\y -> map digitToInt y) . show) \$\endgroup\$ Commented Oct 22, 2016 at 3:30
  • \$\begingroup\$ Ah, of course. concatMap (map digitToInt . show), that is. (Or, if you want, map digitToInt . concatMap show, but that might give a little bit of a different intuition about what the code does?) Let me edit in that missing map in the last code block. \$\endgroup\$ Commented Oct 22, 2016 at 4:38

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