The full description of the problem to solve can be found here. The code I have written works fine but seems extremely verbose for what it's doing, I'm not sure if list comprehensions are meant to be used in the way that I have (maybe some kind of other construct would be more suitable?). Would be great for there to be a way to make the numberPairs
function to be more DRY.
Also get the sense that I don't use function composition enough .
and instead use $
for most nested function calls. Is this bad practice? How could I rewrite some of the functions in this using composition?
I am fairly new to Haskell so am unaware of any typical coding practices.
gridOfNumbers
evaluates to a string containing the grid numbers from the problem with each number in a row separated by spaces and each row separated by newlines. Didn't seem worth including here (although I may be mistaken).
-- | In the `gridOfNumbers` find the 4 adjacent numbers in the given
-- | direction that have the greatest sum.
problem_11 :: Direction -> Int
problem_11 dir =
maximum $ map (\(x1,x2,x3,x4) -> product $ x1:x2:x3:x4:[]) $ numberPairs dir
data Direction = UpDown | SideWays | LeftStartDiagonal | RightStartDiagonal
numberPairs :: Direction -> [(Int,Int,Int,Int)]
numberPairs UpDown =
[(x1,x2,x3,x4) |
currentRow <- [0..16],
currentCol <- [0..19],
let x1 = (listifyGrid !! currentRow) !! currentCol,
let x2 = (listifyGrid !! (currentRow + 1)) !! currentCol,
let x3 = (listifyGrid !! (currentRow + 2)) !! currentCol,
let x4 = (listifyGrid !! (currentRow + 3)) !! currentCol]
numberPairs SideWays =
[(x1,x2,x3,x4) |
currentRow <- [0..19],
currentCol <- [0..16],
let x1 = (listifyGrid !! currentRow) !! currentCol,
let x2 = (listifyGrid !! currentRow) !! (currentCol + 1),
let x3 = (listifyGrid !! currentRow) !! (currentCol + 2),
let x4 = (listifyGrid !! currentRow) !! (currentCol + 3)]
numberPairs LeftStartDiagonal =
[(x1,x2,x3,x4) |
currentRow <- [0..16],
currentCol <- [0..16],
let x1 = (listifyGrid !! currentRow) !! currentCol,
let x2 = (listifyGrid !! (currentRow + 1)) !! (currentCol + 1),
let x3 = (listifyGrid !! (currentRow + 2)) !! (currentCol + 2),
let x4 = (listifyGrid !! (currentRow + 3)) !! (currentCol + 3)]
numberPairs RightStartDiagonal =
[(x1,x2,x3,x4) |
currentRow <- [0..16],
currentCol <- [3..19],
let x1 = (listifyGrid !! currentRow) !! currentCol,
let x2 = (listifyGrid !! (currentRow + 1)) !! (currentCol - 1),
let x3 = (listifyGrid !! (currentRow + 2)) !! (currentCol - 2),
let x4 = (listifyGrid !! (currentRow + 3)) !! (currentCol - 3)]
listifyGrid :: [[Int]]
listifyGrid = map (map read) doubleListOfStrings
where doubleListOfStrings = map (S.split " ") $ lines gridOfNumbers
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The code I have written works fine but seems extremely verbose for what it's doing ... Would be great for there to be a way to make the numberPairs function to be more DRY.
I agree that there's a fair bit of repetition happening. This makes things very explicit, but at the cost of more boilerplate, as you said.
I suggest that the movement patterns for each direction be separated from the actual functionality of extracting a "line" of adjacent numbers from the board. That way, it's easier to see the differences between each direction:
quads :: Direction -> [[Int]]
quads UpDown
= getLines 4 [0..16] [0..19] succ id
quads SideWays
= getLines 4 [0..19] [0..16] id succ
quads LeftStartDiagonal
= getLines 4 [0..16] [0..16] succ succ
quads RightStartDiagonal
= getLines 4 [0..16] [3..19] succ pred
I've renamed numberPairs
to quads
because "pair" usually refers to a 2-tuple. succ
and pred
are just equivalent to (+ 1)
and (- 1)
.
Now you can define getLines
more generally (albeit with an uglier signature), in terms of iterating the row and column position with the supplied rowFn
and colFn
:
getLines :: Int -> [Int] -> [Int] -> (Int -> Int) -> (Int -> Int) -> [[Int]]
getLines n rows cols rowFn colFn =
[line |
row <- rows,
col <- cols,
let coordPairs = zip (iterate rowFn row) (iterate colFn col),
let line = take n $ map gridGet coordPairs]
gridGet :: (Int, Int) -> Int
gridGet (row, col) = listifyGrid !! row !! col
This is just rearranging your code, except that I've used [Int]
instead of (Int,Int,Int,Int)
as the type of each number line. I'm not an experienced Haskeller, but I think that, here, the list is considerably easier to deal with than the tuple, at the expense of giving up an explicit length guarantee.
Using a list also makes it easy to adapt to other lengths than 4, since it's just a take n
. The tuple code, at least structured as you have it right now, would grow linearly.
Also get the sense that I don't use function composition enough . and instead use $ for most nested function calls. Is this bad practice? How could I rewrite some of the functions in this using composition?
Again, keeping in mind that I haven't done a whole lot of Haskell: I don't see anywhere in your code where $
looks out of place.
One place where composition is nice, though, is with map
and nested lists. This:
listifyGrid :: [[Int]]
listifyGrid = map (map read) doubleListOfStrings
where doubleListOfStrings = map (S.split " ") $ lines gridOfNumbers
could use composition if you want, as well as the words
function:
listifyGrid = (map . map) read $ map words $ lines gridOfNumbers
(map . map)
is so elegant that the equivalent in Python, for example, just seems obtuse. Oh, Haskell, you charmer.
Anyway, the main problem_11
function:
problem_11 :: Direction -> Int
problem_11 dir =
maximum $ map (\(x1,x2,x3,x4) -> product $ x1:x2:x3:x4:[]) $ numberPairs dir
can also be defined as a pointfree composition, if that's your style, especially now that we can use map
directly without unwrapping the tuple:
problem_11 = maximum . (map product) . quads
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