@PeterHilton http://hilton.org.uk/ the hardest problem in programming How to name things:
15 years as
the dev team’s only native English speaker... @PeterHilton • 2
George Orwell’s rules for naming
How to name things, by G. Orwell ‘What is above all needed is to
let the meaning choose the word,
and not the other way around. ... the worst thing one can do with words is surrender to them.
‘When you think of a concrete object, you think wordlessly, and then, if you want to describe the thing you have been visualising you probably hunt about until you find the exact words that seem to fit it.
‘When you think of something abstract you are more inclined to use words from the start, and unless you make a conscious effort to prevent it, the existing dialect will come rushing in and do the job for you, at the expense of blurring or even changing your meaning...
1. Never use a metaphor, simile, or other figure of speech which you are used to seeing in print. 2. Never use a long word where a short one will do. 3. If it is possible to cut a word out, always cut it out. 4. Never use the passive where you can use the active. 5. Never use a foreign phrase, a scientific word, or a jargon word if you can think of an everyday English equivalent. 6. Break any of these rules sooner than say anything outright barbarous.
‘These rules sound elementary, and so they are, but they demand a deep change of attitude in anyone who has grown used to writing in the style now fashionable.’
Politics and the English Language
(1946)
1. ‘Never use a metaphor, simile, or other figure of speech which you are used to seeing in print’ (beware of over-using design patterns, and using their names just because you’re used to seeing them in code) e.g. AbstractConfigurationFactory 11@PeterHilton •
2. ‘Never use a long word
where a short one will do’ (prefer concise variable names,
use longer names for a good reason) e.g. company_person_collection vs staff 12@PeterHilton •
3. ‘If it is possible to cut a word out, always cut it out’ (avoid additional words that don’t add any meaning to a name) e.g. AbstractObjectFormatterProxy ... 13@PeterHilton •
AbstractAnnotationConfigDispatcher ServletInitializer 14@PeterHilton • org.springframework.web.servlet.support. ‘This is like homeopathy.
What you’ve done is you’ve diluted the meaning until it’s all gone.’ @KevlinHenney
4. ‘Never use the passive
where you can use the active’ (respect grammatical rules for identifiers) e.g. class PlanEvents vs class EventPlanner or even class Scheduler 15@PeterHilton •
5. ‘Never use a foreign phrase, a scientific word, or a jargon word if you can think of an everyday English equivalent’ (don’t let technical jargon from a library pollute your domain model) (beware libraries that import ‘foreign’ naming from one language to another) e.g. ShipmentMonad 16@PeterHilton •
6. ‘Break any of these rules sooner than say anything outright barbarous’ (don’t blame me if your code is featured on The Daily WTF) Note: a lot depends on context; publishing library code is not the same as maintaining private application code 17@PeterHilton •
It sounds like writing prose
is as hard as
writing code. Who knew? @PeterHilton • 18
Advice from
other writers
21 ‘Write with the
door closed,
rewrite with the
door open.’ Stephen King on pair programming @PeterHilton •
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23 Anne Rice on development hardware ‘I find the bigger
the monitor,
the better the concentration.’ @PeterHilton •
Ernest Hemingway on user personas ‘When writing a novel a writer should create living people;
people not characters.
A character is a caricature.’ 25@PeterHilton •
W. Somerset Maugham on
enterprise architecture ‘There are three rules for writing the novel. Unfortunately, no one knows what they are.’ 27@PeterHilton •
Neil Gaiman on productivity ‘Write.
‘Put one word after another.
Find the right word, put it down.
‘Finish what you’re writing. Whatever you have to do to finish it, finish it.’ 29@PeterHilton •
Neil Gaiman on code review ‘Put it aside. Read it pretending you’ve never read it before. Show it to friends whose opinion you respect’ 30@PeterHilton •
Neil Gaiman on review feedback ‘When people tell you something’s wrong or doesn’t work for them, they are almost always right.
‘When they tell you exactly what they think is wrong and how to fix it, they are almost always wrong.’ 31@PeterHilton •
Neil Gaiman on refactoring ‘Fix it. ‘Remember that, sooner or later, before it ever reaches perfection, you will have to let it go and move on and start to write the next thing. ‘Perfection is like chasing the horizon.
Keep moving.’ 32@PeterHilton •
Neil Gaiman on humour in code ‘Laugh at your own jokes.’ 33@PeterHilton •
Neil Gaiman on open source ‘The main rule of writing is that if you do it with enough assurance and confidence, you’re allowed to do whatever you like.’ 34@PeterHilton •
Summary of advice from writers Advice from writers is useful, and
not only about naming. Writers have been at it for centuries; programming is merely decades old. Also, their advice is better written.
And funnier. 35@PeterHilton •
Getting it right means a struggle for every single word. @PeterHilton • 36
Phil Karlton on naming ‘There are only two hard things
in Computer Science:
1. cache invalidation and 2. naming things.’ 38@PeterHilton • 0. off-by-one errors
Lewis Carroll on bad naming ‘When I use a word,’ Humpty Dumpty said, in rather a scornful tone, ‘it means just what I choose it to mean - neither more nor less.’ Through the Looking-Glass,
and What Alice Found There (1871) 39@PeterHilton •
Deliberately meaningless names In theory, foo is only used as a placeholder name (because it doesn’t mean anything) 40@PeterHilton •
Sam Gardiner on naming ‘If you don’t know what a thing should be called, you cannot know what it is. If you don’t know what it is, you cannot sit down and write the code.’ http://97things.oreilly.com/wiki/index.php/ A_rose_by_any_other_name_will_end_up_as_a_cabbage 41@PeterHilton •
What is the worst ever
variable name? data What is the second-worst name? data2 What is the third-worst name ever? data_2 42@PeterHilton •
Abbreviations are ambiguous Is char a character or characteristic? Does mod mean modify or modulo? What about acc, pos or auth? Sadly, fab was just a function ƒ:A➞B
(not fabulous) Allow one exception: id for ‘identity’ 43@PeterHilton •
One letter is too short Local variable: what is the meaning? var a = 42; The exception that proves the rule? for (int i = 1; i < 42; ++i) Not an improvement:
ii, jj, kk 44@PeterHilton •
Functional programming:
one letter is still too short 45@PeterHilton • def modp[C]
(f: B1 (B2, C), a: A1):
(A2, C) = { val (b, c) = f(get(a)) (set(a, b), c) } https://github.com/scalaz/scalaz/blob/series/7.2.x/core/src/main/scala/scalaz/Lens.scala
Multiple words can be replaced by more specific words What’s an appointment_list? a calendar What’s an company_person? an employee or perhaps an owner What’s a text_correction_by_editor? just an edit 50@PeterHilton •
Vague words are vague 51@PeterHilton • Alan Green wrote* about vague words, e.g. InvoiceManager TaskManager ‘Manager’ is very imprecise; one of its meanings may be the word you want: Bucket, Supervisor, Planner, Builder * http://www.bright-green.com/blog/2003_02_25/naming_java_classes_without_a.html
Vague words are vague 52@PeterHilton • get at the start of a method name is
appropriate only for returning a field value. If it does anything else, or gets the data from anywhere else, use another name: fetch, find, lookup, create, calculate, derive, concoct,
Wrong words are wrong, Synonyms are confusing order ≠ shipment carrier ≠ broker shipment ≠ transport leg shipment = consignment carrier = transporter transport leg = journey 53@PeterHilton •
Apache Camel - http://camel.apache.org (Java enterprise
middleware example)
// Not enough jokes in code /** Configure and start Apache Camel. */ { Logger.info("Starting Camel...") val context = new DefaultCamelContext() configuredRoutes foreach { route =>
context.addRoutes(route)
} context.start() } def mountCamel() {
Property accessors revisited In a numeric library, these method names would be irresistible, but inadvisable: getEven getReal getAround getRoundTo getRichQuick getJoke 57@PeterHilton •
Summary of naming things badly Meaningless: foo Too general: data Too short: a Too long: text_correction_by_editor Abbreviated: acc Vague: InvoiceManager Wrong: order Just not funny: startCamel 58@PeterHilton •
How to solve the naming problem Become a better writer. Improve your vocabulary. Adopt better naming practices. Work on it. 60@PeterHilton •
Become a better writer Naming is just one part of writing, and is mostly about vocabulary. You may remember working on vocabulary as part of learning a foreign language. Not having had to learn a foreign language is a mixed blessing. 61@PeterHilton •
Improve your general vocabulary Read books, especially funny novels. Play word games with someone who always wins, until they don’t. 62@PeterHilton •
63@PeterHilton • Piotr / CC BY 2.0
Improve your general vocabulary Use your dictionary and thesaurus... 65@PeterHilton •
@PeterHilton • 67 A sandwich walks into a pub. The barman says,
‘I’m sorry, we don’t serve food.’
Tell jokes Many jokes rely on word-play. It takes practice to think of puns quickly. Puns are important for naming, because they rely on double-meanings. Spotting double-meanings is the essential skill for avoiding ambiguous names. 68@PeterHilton •
Adopt better naming practices 69@PeterHilton • Start with meaning and intention. Use words with precise meanings. Prefer fewer words in names. No abbreviations in names, except id. Use code review to improve names. Remember: ‘rename’ is the simplest but most effective refactoring. Use it.
Replace vague words with more specific synonyms Manager Object Data Thing Info Amount Details
do execute perform operate manage handle get 70@PeterHilton •
Overcome fear of renaming The only thing harder than naming is renaming. Renaming requires change, a conversation, and new understanding. ‘Refactor’ is the safest refactoring. 71@PeterHilton •
Chapter 10: The power of variable names
Chapter 2: Meaningful Names
Gather domain-specific vocabulary Scan the domain model entities’ Wikipedia pages for names of related concepts. Read novels set in your customer’s domain, to learn their jargon. Find out what they really mean. 75@PeterHilton •
Chapter 2: Communication and the use of language
Programmers Stack Exchange - question by Tragedian answered by gnat / CC-BY-SA For naming, there are six techniques that were proven to work for me: 1. spend a lot of time on inventing names 2. use code reviews 3. don’t hesitate to rename 4. spend a lot of time on inventing names 5. use code reviews 6. don’t hesitate to rename
Additional benefits If you become a better writer, you could use your new skills ... for writing 80@PeterHilton •
Writing whole sentences in code
‘Most of the things programmers say about comments in code are excuses for not writing any comments at all.’ @PeterHilton 82@PeterHilton •
Comments: the basics 1. Don’t say what the code does
(because the code already says that) 2. Don’t explain awkward logic
(improve the code to make it clear) 3. Don’t add too many comments
(it’s messy and they’ll get out of date) 83@PeterHilton •
Explain why the code exists Even perfect code cannot explain its own existence. When should I use this code? When shouldn’t I use it? What are the alternatives to this code? 84@PeterHilton •
Discover which comments are hard to write, and why If a comment is easy to write, then that code doesn’t need a comment. Write a one-sentence comment, for
every class and method, to start with. 85@PeterHilton •
‘A common fallacy is to assume authors of incomprehensible code will somehow be able to express themselves lucidly and clearly in comments.’ @KevlinHenney 86@PeterHilton •
Acknowledge that writing (comments) is a specialist skill On a cross-functional development team, not everyone is good at visual design. The same goes for writing about code. Work out who is a better writer. Get help with writing comments. 87@PeterHilton •
How to write good comments (summary) 1. Try to write good code first. 2. Try to write a one-sentence comment. 3. Refactor the code until the comment is easy to write. 4. Now write a good comment. 5. Don’t forget the rules of good writing (e.g. remove unnecessary comments). 88@PeterHilton •
Summary 1. Naming is hard 2. Get inspiration from great writers 3. Read novels, tell jokes, play games 4. Expand your vocabulary 5. Try actual writing;
start with comments,
try blogging, or even write a book 90@PeterHilton •
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