Editorial LC comments on MTOM

• From: Jacek Kopecky <jacek.kopecky@deri.at>
• Date: 2004年6月18日 18:39:34 +0200
• To: XMLP Comments <xmlp-comments@w3.org>
• Message-Id: <1087576774.3043.63.camel@Kalb>

Hi, here are my editorial comments on the MTOM LC draft:
1) just before section 2.3.2 add text ...MUST not be optimized >>by
implementations of this feature<<
2) 2.3.2 should say "should generate a fault" instead of "should fault"
3) 4.3.1.1 content-tranfer-encoding - missing 's' in transfer
4) 4.3.2 2nd paragraph says "The remaining of this section describes the
perturbations", first it should be the "remainder", second there seem to
be such formal perturbations, like the ones described in the table in
4.3.1.1
Best regards,
 Jacek Kopecky
 Ph.D. researcher
 Digital Enterprise Research Institute
 http://www.deri.at/

Received on Friday, 18 June 2004 12:39:41 UTC