Friday, October 31, 2014
Halloween III
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Thursday, October 30, 2014
Halloween II
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Ebola cured! Mideast at peace!
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Tuesday, October 28, 2014
Happy Halloween!
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Sunday, October 26, 2014
I couldn't either
Now, what do you suppose made a rewrite of a local cut-n-paste from the real estate listings the fourth most super-important story of the afternoon? Well ... Chicago, gangsters -- maybe the commenters can tell us!
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Saturday, October 25, 2014
No, but thanks for asking
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Monday, October 20, 2014
Treason!
Despite the sudden loss of confidence on Wall Street last week, the U.S. economy shows little sign of faltering and its solid footing helped nurture a quick recovery in stocks.
Wait! Who put this at the top of the front page?
Economists point out that U.S. growth took off in the spring quarter with a 4.5 percent rebound from a winter slump and is expected to continue at a healthy 3 percent clip in the second half of the year. That far surpasses the growth rates in Europe and even bests the sluggish growth of formerly robust emerging economies such as Brazil and Russia.
Perhaps more important, the U.S. jobs machine got back into action this year, churning out a string of job gains averaging well over 200,000 a month in what looks to be the best year for job growth since the 1990s.
You'll be telling us that Nigeria has been declared free of Ebola next.
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Saturday, October 18, 2014
Hello there, stranger!
Because of an editing error, an article on Friday about Bermuda’s preparations for Hurricane Gonzalo as it approached the island misstated, in some copies, the location of Bermuda relative to North Carolina. It is 670 miles east of North Carolina, not west.
If you said "three lengths of a fool," take the rest of the day off. When in doubt, look it up; when certain, look it up anyway.
Labels: corrections, NYT
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Friday, October 17, 2014
Today in advertising
Should you be scoring along at home, the first ad on British TV was still almost eight years away.
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Thursday, October 16, 2014
Tell us what you really think
Here's the caption provided online for the thumbnail above:
Edward M. "Ted" Kennedy’s first marriage to Joan Bennett, ended in divorce in 1982, with Time nmagazine* reporting the marriage was annulled by the Vatican more than a decade later.
Weird, huh? The noun "Kennedy" doesn't seem to appear anywhere in the text.
* (sic), if you're scoring along at home.
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Wednesday, October 15, 2014
Today in the echo chamber
This isnt negligence, this is intentional. We have a madman in the Oval Office and millions of liberal co-conspirators. Store up plenty of food and emergency supplies, its going to get real ugly real soon.
ANYONE that still considers this joke an American Potus deserves nothing more than a one way plane ticket straight to Africa! Hes done nothing more than put strain on American taxpayers while spending on his personal priorities=llegals-terrorist-career government dependent and supporting his homeland-AFRICA!!!
After their success in freeing the girls in Nigeria, Moochelle will dragout #Ebola to fight this Republican disease!
This so called President'''''''''should be skinned alive.
... while on others, comments are (hem) "currently closed" (kaff)? You'd think a tale of Pentagon skulduggery on this scale would be the ideal chance to call the minutemen to the streets:
American troops were exposed to chemical weapons multiple times in the years following the 2003 invasion of Iraq, while the Pentagon kept their discoveries of the expired or degraded weapons secret from investigators, fellow soldiers, and military doctors, according to a published report.
Yes, that'd be the deftly reported centerpiece in Wednesday's Times, which Fox manages to acknowledge, along with some numbers in the next graf:
The New York Times reported late Tuesday that American troops reported finding approximately 5,000 chemical warheads, shells, or aviation bombs in the years following the 2003 invasion of Iraq. On at least six occasions, soldiers were wounded by those weapons, which had been manufactured before 1991.
Not a bad summary of the nut graf, but the narrative seems somehow incomplete without the Times's subsequent graf:
The United States had gone to war declaring it must destroy an active weapons of mass destruction program. Instead, American troops gradually found and ultimately suffered from the remnants of long-abandoned programs, built in close collaboration with the West.
Not to mention the details worked in later:
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Tuesday, October 14, 2014
Negligent journalism
Bush* said the dysfunction in Washington, D.C., with President Barack Obama and Sen. Majority leader Harry Reid has led to a recession where economic growth is only about 2%. He said under Republican leadership, the U.S. can grow at 3.5% to 4%.
"The dysfunction in Washington, D.C., with President Barack Obama and Senate Majority Leader** Harry Reid" is sort of random reporter-speak, but probably not too inaccurate a reflection of the speaker's opinion. Fine. "He said under Republican leadership, the U.S. can grow at 3.5% to 4%" -- well, even the AP would want a complementizing "that," and as opinions go, it's on the flying-unicorns side, but if that's his pitch, we need to let him make it.
The problem is in the middle: "A recession where economic growth is only about 2%." News flash for Jeb, and for the folks who wrote it and who waved it along into print: That's not a recession. The cheapest first-year-econ definition of a recession would be two straight quarters of GDP shrinkage. You don't have to like the way the economy is going, but if you say it's doing something it's not, you're in the same category as the poll unskewers and the goober at the New York Post who's going to come out any month now with definitive proof that the usurper's minions rigged the BLS employment data in fall 2012. That's not a good place for the press -- the honest press, at least -- to be.
* Jeb, if you're scoring along at home
** How do you hide a five-dollar bill from a reporter? Put it in the stylebook. "Sen." is short for Senator, not Senate, and "majority leader" should be capitalized before the name. Sheez.
Labels: lies, statistics, War on Editing
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Monday, October 13, 2014
It isn't a threat ...
Defense Secretary Chuck Hagel on Monday described climate change as a national security threat -- at a time when the U.S. military is battling the Islamic State in the Mideast, responding to the Ebola crisis in West Africa, and monitoring tensions between Ukraine and Russia.
Shh! Nobody say "China" too loudly.
The Defense secretary addressed the issue during a speech in Peru, as the Pentagon released a comprehensive report on the "national security" challenges posed by rising global temperatures and "extreme weather events."
If Drudge ever runs out of "scare quotes," it's good to know he'll be able to borrow some from Fox.
Hagel described climate change as a "threat multiplier," saying it "has the potential to exacerbate many of the challenges we already confront today -- from infectious disease to armed insurgencies -- and to produce new challenges in the future."
The Pentagon's new report maps out four areas of climate change deemed the most threatening to the U.S. military -- rising global temperatures, changing precipitation patterns, more extreme weather and rising sea levels. And it warns about the impact they could have on food and water supplies, the environment and American security itself.
"Our militaries' readiness could be tested, and our capabilities could be stressed," Hagel said, addressing a conference of military leaders.
Which sounds, as it has for some years now, like a fairly sensible observation. Nor are the armed forces the only bunch of folks who see a security dimension in this issue.But that's probably not the point, is it?
Still, while the Pentagon and high-ranking officials have previously warned of the dangers of changing weather patterns and its side effects, the robust focus on the issue is raising questions at a time when the U.S. military is engaged in fighting the advancing Islamic State in Iraq and Syria.
Always nice to be reminded you don't need the passive voice to be coy about agency. Or did we just miss the part about infectious diseases and armed insurgencies?
Citing the Islamic State's recent gains, Sen. James Inhofe, R-Okla., said in a statement: "It is disappointing, but not surprising, that the president and his administration would focus on climate change when there are other, legitimate, threats in the world."
Because it's just not a security story until you get the Kenyan into it somehow, is it? Now get off my lawn.
Labels: fox, securitzation
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Sunday, October 12, 2014
Yes. And then again ...
Schuette leads Totten 38%-32%, according to the most recent Free Press poll. But with a 4 percentage point margin of error, the numbers could be much closer. And that gives hope to the Totten campaign, especially considering of the 600 people surveyed statewide 70% said they didn't know who he was.
Yes, the numbers could be much closer. On the other hand, there's an equally good chance that they could be much farther apart. The "margin of error" doesn't just apply to both proportions; it applies to both directions. And it isn't magic. It's a calculation. It expresses the range within which the sample value -- the proportion of respondents who say they're planning to vote for Candidate A or Candidate B -- accurately represents the population value, which is A's or B's support among all likely voters, or registered voters, or adults with landlines, or whatever it was you sampled.
In this case, there are about two chances in three that the sample is within 2 points of the population value* -- meaning that if the real split was 36-34, we'd have a pretty accurate poll. But it would be an equally accurate reflection of a 40-30 split.
There's another then-again to worry about. Voters who can't identify a candidate in a survey might come to support the candidate once they figure out who she or he is. And then again, they might not. If the story is meant to shed some light on what's often an obscure statewide race, it should stop spinning its wheels and get to work.
* It's fractionally smaller in a race like this; the Totten vs. Schuette proportion is 32-38, but the Totten vs. not-Totten proportion is 32-68, so Totten's margin of error at 95% confidence is about 3.7 points. In a poll that reports lots of different races, it's easiest to calculate sampling error as if everything was split 50-50.
Labels: polls
posted by fev at 11:29 AM 0 comments
Basics of editing: Forbidden verbs
Here's the basic cutline rule again: Don't tell me what I'm seeing. Tell me why I'm seeing it. Follow that rule and you'll never be tempted to write "celebrates" when you can write about what's being celebrated. If the touchdown was, as the game story contends, the most significant play of the first half, borrow that description: "Michigan's Devin Furness took a pass that appeared headed for a Penn State defender and walked it in for a 43-yard touchdown in the first quarter."
As for "shares a laugh with," just don't.
Labels: cutlines, editing basics, forbidden words
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Friday, October 10, 2014
Lying with statistics: Ur doin it wrong
- "Real Clear Politics average"
- "Within the margin of error"
- "Statistical dead heat"
Senator Jeanne Shaheen (D., N.H.) and Republican challenger Scott Brown continue to find themselves neck-and-neck in the New Hampshire Senate race less than four weeks away from the election.
The latest NH1/New England College poll shows Shaheen leading Brown 48.5 percent to 46 percent, falling within the roughly three-point margin of error. Just 3 percent of voters remain undecided at this point.
Well, not quite. The lead is 48.5 to 45.9, according to the polling agency, and the margin of sampling error -- which you really should leave to one decimal place* -- is 2.7 points, meaning (at 95% confidence) that the result is right at the so-called "margin." Whether you're a tenth of a point above or a tenth of a point below the arbitrary number that's misapplied here, the best bet is that Shaheen is leading. All you have to do is turn the confidence level down to about two-thirds. If that's your idea of a dead heat, you shouldn't go to the track by yourself.
There's no such bogus statisculating in the second example:
* This poll has a sample of 1,286; you could get a margin of 3 points -- OK, 3.04 -- at 95% confidence with 250 fewer respondents.
** Real Clear Politics is a useful archive of current survey results and sample sizes, but averaging a bunch of estimates -- particularly estimates with different CIs -- is never a good idea. The commentary files can be pretty hilarious, though.
Labels: heds, magic phrases, national review, polls
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Tuesday, October 07, 2014
The endless capacity for self-delusion
"Hard lead" is kind of a novel statistical concept, so maybe it's rude to point out that with a +/- 3-point maximum margin of sampling error* (at 95% confidence for the full sample of 1,058), this one's also pretty close to the traditional standard of statistical significance. But by all means continue:
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Sunday, October 05, 2014
You don't know, Jack
An article last Sunday about the ubiquity of digital video recording on iPhones misstated, at one point, the surname of a rock musician who had complained about the glowing digital devices of his audience members. As the article correctly noted elsewhere, he is Jack White, not "Mr. Black."
Labels: corrections, NYT
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Thursday, October 02, 2014
Noah and the whale, Jonah and the ark
A picture caption on Wednesday with a theater review of "The Old Man and the Old Moon," at the New Victory Theater in Manhattan, reversed the identities of two actors in some editions. Ryan Melia is at the top and Ben Ferguson is at the left. And the review, citing influences on the show, misidentified the book of the Bible in which a man winds up in the belly of a giant fish. It is Jonah, not Genesis.
And you can look it up.
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Wednesday, October 01, 2014
HAHAHAHAHA watermelon!
And what's the latest on the apologia front?
Boston Herald cartoonist Jerry Holbert took to the airwaves this morning to apologize for a political cartoon that set off a social media firestorm after appearing on the paper's editorial page.
"I want to apologize to anyone I offended who was hurt by the cartoon," Holbert said this morning on Boston Herald Radio. "It was certainly, absolutely, not my intention."
... Holbert claimed he came up with the idea to use watermelon flavor after finding "kids Colgate watermelon flavor" toothpaste in his bathroom at home.
"I was completely naive or innocent to any racial connotations," Holbert said. "I wasn’t thinking along those lines at all."
Got it. I mean, it's not like the Kenyan's brushing his teeth with a chicken bone or anything.
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