[Python-checkins] gh-85747: "Preface" section of asyncio-eventloop.rst: Switch to active voice and suggest other edits (#99784)

Sat Dec 3 19:48:46 EST 2022

https://github.com/python/cpython/commit/bf26bdf6ac04878fc720e78422991aaedb9808a1
commit: bf26bdf6ac04878fc720e78422991aaedb9808a1
branch: main
author: Brian Skinn <brian.skinn at gmail.com>
committer: gvanrossum <gvanrossum at gmail.com>
date: 2022年12月03日T16:48:41-08:00
summary:
gh-85747: "Preface" section of asyncio-eventloop.rst: Switch to active voice and suggest other edits (#99784)
files:
M Doc/library/asyncio-eventloop.rst

diff --git a/Doc/library/asyncio-eventloop.rst b/Doc/library/asyncio-eventloop.rst
index d0a1ed2b99e5..0bcaed5477fa 100644
--- a/Doc/library/asyncio-eventloop.rst
+++ b/Doc/library/asyncio-eventloop.rst
@@ -33,7 +33,8 @@ an event loop:
 
 Return the running event loop in the current OS thread.
 
- If there is no running event loop a :exc:`RuntimeError` is raised.
+ Raise a :exc:`RuntimeError` if there is no running event loop.
+
 This function can only be called from a coroutine or a callback.
 
 .. versionadded:: 3.7
@@ -52,17 +53,19 @@ an event loop:
 :func:`get_running_loop` function is preferred to :func:`get_event_loop`
 in coroutines and callbacks.
 
- Consider also using the :func:`asyncio.run` function instead of using
- lower level functions to manually create and close an event loop.
+ As noted above, consider using the higher-level :func:`asyncio.run` function,
+ instead of using these lower level functions to manually create and close an
+ event loop.
 
 .. deprecated:: 3.10
- Deprecation warning is emitted if there is no running event loop.
- In future Python releases, this function will be an alias of
- :func:`get_running_loop`.
+ Emits a deprecation warning if there is no running event loop.
+ In future Python releases, this function may become an alias of
+ :func:`get_running_loop` and will accordingly raise a
+ :exc:`RuntimeError` if there is no running event loop.
 
 .. function:: set_event_loop(loop)
 
- Set *loop* as a current event loop for the current OS thread.
+ Set *loop* as the current event loop for the current OS thread.
 
 .. function:: new_event_loop()
 
