[Python-checkins] r64938 - python/trunk/Doc/library/multiprocessing.rst

Mon Jul 14 02:35:33 CEST 2008

Author: andrew.kuchling
Date: Mon Jul 14 02:35:32 2008
New Revision: 64938
Log:
Typo fixes
Modified:
 python/trunk/Doc/library/multiprocessing.rst
Modified: python/trunk/Doc/library/multiprocessing.rst
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--- python/trunk/Doc/library/multiprocessing.rst	(original)
+++ python/trunk/Doc/library/multiprocessing.rst	Mon Jul 14 02:35:32 2008
@@ -170,7 +170,7 @@
 **Server process**
 
 A manager object returned by :func:`Manager` controls a server process which
- holds python objects and allows other processes to manipulate them using
+ holds Python objects and allows other processes to manipulate them using
 proxies.
 
 A manager returned by :func:`Manager` will support types :class:`list`,
@@ -453,7 +453,7 @@
 This means that if you try joining that process you may get a deadlock unless
 you are sure that all items which have been put on the queue have been
 consumed. Similarly, if the child process is non-daemonic then the parent
- process may hang on exit when it tries to join all it non-daemonic children.
+ process may hang on exit when it tries to join all its non-daemonic children.
 
 Note that a queue created using a manager does not have this issue. See
 :ref:`multiprocessing-programming`.
@@ -534,7 +534,8 @@
 Equivalent to ``get(False)``.
 
 :class:`multiprocessing.Queue` has a few additional methods not found in
- :class:`Queue.Queue` which are usually unnecessary:
+ :class:`Queue.Queue`. These methods are usually unnecessary for most
+ code:
 
 .. method:: close()
 
