- From: Jan Grant <Jan.Grant@bristol.ac.uk>
- Date: 2003年2月24日 11:18:26 +0000 (GMT)
- To: Susan Lesch <lesch@w3.org>
- cc: www-rdf-comments@w3.org
- Message-ID: <Pine.GSO.4.44.0302241117020.27130-100000@mail.ilrt.bris.ac.uk>
On 2003年2月23日, Susan Lesch wrote: > > Here are minor editorial comments for your "RDF Test Cases" Last Call > Working Draft [1]. > > In section 2, make the target of the URI links normative references and > eliminate the URIs in prose. "Test Case Repository," "RDF Issue > Tracking," "Manifest," "Manifest Head" or "Head", and "Manifest Tail" > or "Tail" would be easier to read. > > s/WG/Working Group/ > s/working group/Working Group/ > In 2.1, s/these tests consist of one (or more) input documents in > RDF/XML as is revised/These tests consist of one (or more) input > document in RDF/XML as is revised/ or /These tests consist of one or > more input documents in RDF/XML as are revised/ > s/is NOT drawn/is <em>not</em> drawn/ > > s/2.4. Running the test cases/2.4. Running the Test Cases/ > > In 2.4, Euler can be a link to a normative reference [EULER]. Same for > cwm, n-triples2kif.pl and Euler in 3, and for "the notation used in XML > 1.0 second edition" in 3.1. (Those are just the ones I noticed: any link > from the prose to outside should have a link to a reference for people > who print.) > > Where the original URI Reference contains characters not allowed in > such a sequence, the standard escaping procedure described in [RFC > 2396] using UTF-8 as the character encoding is applied, using UTF-8 > as the character encoding. > becomes: > Where the original URI reference contains characters not allowed in > such a sequence, the standard escaping procedure described in [RFC > 2396] using UTF-8 as the character encoding is applied. > > minor typos: > s/Internet Media Type/Internet media type/ > s/MIME Type/MIME type/ > s/T Texin/T. Texin/ > > [1] http://www.w3.org/TR/2003/WD-rdf-testcases-20030123/ > > Best wishes for your project, Susan, thanks for the keen eye! I'll fold in your suggestions. -- jan grant, ILRT, University of Bristol. http://www.ilrt.bris.ac.uk/ Tel +44(0)117 9287088 Fax +44 (0)117 9287112 http://ioctl.org/jan/ If it's broken really badly - don't fix it either.
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