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I'm sure doc improvements are welcome here, so thank you :)
However, I think you need to
1) split this up into small patches that address very
specific issues, and briefly justify each change in the
patch submission note on the SF patch tracker
2) present the patches by editing the original .tex source
files from src/Doc/lib and then running 'diff -u' or 'svn
diff' (it doesn't matter if you can't compile the docs or
get the TeX markup wrong, just as long as everybody can see
exactly what the intended changes to the text are)
Also, one thing that caught my eye on a very brief scan was
that the actual response code->name mapping (rather than a
note to document the existence of that mapping) shouldn't be
reproduced in the docs, I think.